Tuesday, June 6, 2023

POETIC DICTION

 

One of the many joys of reading English literature is to revel in “poetic diction”, that high-flown style of writing or speaking, which arrests by its rhythms, its aptness and its imaginative range. In our rich literature, there are many exponents of this style, mainly recognised poets, and I share with you some of my favourites, to supplement those of my readers. My selection is conventional - many are ”golden oldies” which have delighted us for centuries.

1.       Geoffrey Chaucer (1340-1400)

Whan that Aprille with his shoures soote,

The droghte of March hath perced to the roote,

And bathed every veyne in swich licóur

Of which vertú engendred is the flour;

Whan Zephirus eek with his swete breeth

Inspired hath in every holt and heeth

The tendre croppes, and the yonge sonne

Hath in the Ram his halfe cours y-ronne,

And smale foweles maken melodye,

That slepen al the nyght with open ye,

So priketh hem Natúre in hir corages,

Thanne longen folk to goon on pilgrimages,

 

(from the Prologue to the Canterbury Tales 1387)

 

Unfamiliar vocabulary, eccentric spelling, obscure meanings were enough to send a schoolboy a-quiver with apprehension, but after some robust teaching, and with access to a glossary, he quickly gave the passage a grin of recognition and set out on the road of moving through middle English to the modern language.

 

2. Thomas Cranmer (1469-1556)

 

We have erred, and strayed from thy ways like lost sheep. We have followed too much the devices and desires of our own hearts.

We have left undone those things which we ought to have done; And we have done those things which we ought not to have done; And there is no health in us

And grant, O most merciful Father, for his sake; That we may hereafter live a godly, righteous, and sober life.

And forgive us our trespasses, as we forgive them that trespass against us.

Glory be to the Father, and to the Son: and to the Holy Ghost; As it was in the beginning, is now, and ever shall be: world without end. Amen.

(From The Book of Common Prayer, revised 1662)

Prose, of course, and devotional, but I call it Poetic Prose.

3.    William Shakespeare (1564-1616)

Tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow,

Creeps in this petty pace from day to day,

To the last syllable of recorded time;

And all our yesterdays have lighted fools

The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!

Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,

That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,

And then is heard no more. It is a tale

Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,

Signifying nothing.

 

From Macbeth

 

Who would fardels bear, to grunt and sweat under a weary life, but that the dread of something after death, The undiscovered country from whose bourn No traveller returns, puzzles the will and makes us rather bear those ills we have Than fly to others that we know not of? Thus, conscience does make cowards of us all, and thus the native hue of resolution Is sicklied o’er with the pale cast of thought, and enterprises of great pith and moment with this regard their currents turn awry and lose the name of action.

 

From Hamlet

Our revels now are ended. These our actors,

As I foretold you, were all spirits and

Are melted into air, into thin air:

And, like the baseless fabric of this vision,

The cloud-capp’d towers, the gorgeous palaces,

The solemn temples, the great globe itself,

Yea, all which it inherit, shall dissolve

And, like this insubstantial pageant faded,

Leave not a rack behind. We are such stuff

As dreams are made on, and our little life

Is rounded with a sleep.

 

From The Tempest

 

Poetic Diction in all its glory!

 

 

 

4.      John Donne (1572-1631)

 

If some king of the earth have so large an extent of dominion, in North, and South, as that he hath Winter and Summer together in his dominions, so large an extent East and West, as that he hath day and night together in his dominions, much more hath God mercy and judgment together: He brought light out of darkness, not out of a lesser light; he can bring thy Summer out of Winter, though thou hast no Spring? though in the ways of fortune, or understanding, or conscience, thou have been benighted till now, wintered and frozen, clouded and eclipsed, damped and benumbed, smothered and stupefied till now - now God comes to thee, not as in the dawning of the day, not as in the bud of the spring, but as the Sun at noon to illustrate all shadows, as the sheaves in harvest, to fill all penuries. All occasions invite his mercies.

 

(From sermon preached at St Paul’s Christmas Day 1624)

 

Donne’s peroration is one of the glories of our language.

5.      Samuel Taylor Coleridge (1771-1834)

But oh that deep romantic chasm which slanted
Down the green hill athwart a cedarn cover!
A savage place! as holy and inchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
And from this chasm, with ceaseless turmoil seething,
As if this earth in fast thick pants were breathing,
A mighty fountain momently was forced:
Amid whose swift half-intermitted Burst
Huge fragments vaulted like rebounding hail,
Or chaffy grain beneath the thresher's flail:
And mid these dancing rocks at once and ever
It flung up momently the sacred river.
Five miles meandering with a mazy motion
Through wood and dale the sacred river ran,
Then reached the caverns measureless to man,
And sank in tumult to a lifeless ocean:
And 'mid this tumult Kubla heard from far
Ancestral voices prophesying war!

     The shadow of the dome of pleasure
     Floated midway on the waves;
     Where was heard the mingled measure
     From the fountain and the caves.
It was a miracle of rare device,
A sunny pleasure-dome with caves of ice!

(From Kubla Khan 1816)

Coleridge’s visions may have been opiate-assisted – they possess great power nonetheless.

6.      William Wordsworth (1770-1850)

Then sing, ye Birds, sing, sing a joyous song!

                      And let the young Lambs bound

                      As to the tabor's sound!

We in thought will join your throng,

                      Ye that pipe and ye that play,

                      Ye that through your hearts to-day

                      Feel the gladness of the May!

What though the radiance which was once so bright

Be now for ever taken from my sight,

                Though nothing can bring back the hour

Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;

                      We will grieve not, rather find

                      Strength in what remains behind;

                      In the primal sympathy

                      Which having been must ever be;

                      In the soothing thoughts that spring

                      Out of human suffering;

                      In the faith that looks through death,

In years that bring the philosophic mind.

And O, ye Fountains, Meadows, Hills, and Groves,

Forebode not any severing of our loves!

Yet in my heart of hearts I feel your might;

I only have relinquished one delight

To live beneath your more habitual sway.

I love the Brooks which down their channels fret,

Even more than when I tripped lightly as they;

The innocent brightness of a new-born Day

                      Is lovely yet.

 

(From Intimations of Immortality 1807)

 

To my mind, Wordsworth’s Poetic Diction surpasses all others.

 

 

7.      John Keats (1795-1821)

 

Much have I travell'd in the realms of gold,

And many goodly states and kingdoms seen;

Round many western islands have I been

Which bards in fealty to Apollo hold.

Oft of one wide expanse had I been told

That deep-brow'd Homer ruled as his demesne;

Yet did I never breathe its pure serene

Till I heard Chapman speak out loud and bold:

Then felt I like some watcher of the skies

When a new planet swims into his ken;

Or like stout Cortez when with eagle eyes

He star'd at the Pacific—and all his men

Look'd at each other with a wild surmise—

Silent, upon a peak in Darien.

 

(From On First looking into Chapman’s Homer 1816)

 

Keats’ Odes are unsurpassed but the above is very striking.

 

 

8.      Lord George Byron (1780-1824)

 

THE isles of Greece! the isles of Greece
    Where burning Sappho loved and sung,
Where grew the arts of war and peace,
    Where Delos rose, and Phoebus sprung!
Eternal summer gilds them yet,
But all, except their sun, is set.

The Scian and the Teian muse,
    The hero’s harp, the lover’s lute,
Have found the fame your shores refuse:
    Their place of birth alone is mute
To sounds which echo further west
Than your sires’ ‘Islands of the Blest’.

The mountains look on Marathon—
    And Marathon looks on the sea;
And musing there an hour alone,
    I dream’d that Greece might still be free;
For standing on the Persians’ grave,
I could not deem myself a slave.

My chosen quote is an 1819 patriotic call for Greek independence and Byron, like me, was brought up in Aberdeen and even went to my same primary school. Some alumnus!

9.      Percy Bysshe Shelley (1792-1822)

To suffer woes which Hope thinks infinite;
To forgive wrongs darker than death or night;
To defy Power, which seems omnipotent;
To love, and bear; to hope till Hope creates
From its own wreck the thing it contemplates;
Neither to change, not falter, nor repent;
This, like thy glory, Titan, is to be
Good, great and joyous, beautiful and free;
This is alone Life, Joy, Empire, and Victory

 

(From Prometheus Unbound 1820)

 

Shelley was a committed radical and this inspiring passage proclaims his hopes.

 

 

10.  W. B. Yeats (1868-1939)

I will arise and go now, and go to Innisfree,
And a small cabin build there, of 
clay and wattles made;
Nine bean rows will I have there, a hive for the honey bee,
And live alone in the bee-loud 
glade.

And I shall have some peace there, for peace comes dropping slow,
Dropping from the veils of the morning to where the cricket sings;
There midnight's all a glimmer, and noon a purple glow,
And evening full of the linnet's wings.

I will arise and go now, for always night and day
I hear lake water lapping with low sounds by the shore;
While I stand on the roadway, or on the pavements grey,
I hear it in the deep heart's core.

(The Lake Isle of Innisfree 1890)

Yeats survived into my century and his lovely poem is still widely admired. Some of his native Irish disparage it, as hackneyed and over-familiar, but I remain moved by its language and its emotive images.

I hope my selection appeals to my readers. I already hear some critics who may complain it is “male, stale and pale, “but no lady, person of colour or youngster has yet produced diction of comparable quality, although there must be an abundance of talent.

Meanwhile, take immense pride in our profound literary and cultural heritage – as a final bonne bouche I attach a video of “Jerusalem” – a great poem by William Blake and a great 1916 anthem by Sir Hubert Parry.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1x8wouy3mE&ab_channel=RoyalChoralSoc

 

SMD

6.6.23

Text Copyright ©Sidney Donald 2023

Wednesday, May 17, 2023

OUT OF STEP

  

My generation, the wartime and early post-war generation, is of course largely retired, economically inactive and slowly but surely diminishing in number. We are not a key constituency but take pride in our traditions, our achievements, our human contributions and our wider families. We try to take a mellow view of the behaviour of our younger successors, although we are not always in sympathy with, or in understanding of, the modern world. We prefer not to talk of alienation nor isolation but the fact is we find ourselves living in a hectic, noisy, mad-house cosmos beyond parody, stretching our tolerance and critical faculties to the utmost limit.



                The Finnish Eurovision entry – Cha-cha-cha

To set the scene, this year’s Eurovision in grim Liverpool, upon which vast treasure is expended, was won by a Swedish (actually a Berber Moroccan) chanteuse called Loreen caged in a box whose tortured “song” was supplemented by gestures from her hideously elongated finger-nails. Worse, in second place was the Finnish effort, fronted by a kinky-looking gentleman with lurid green sleeves who ululated his tongue in a disgusting fashion. The UK entry, screamed by Britain-hating activist Mae Muller, was deservedly second last, only just surpassing the truly dismal German entry. All the songs were of the thumping Euro-technopop genus, their connection with real music totally inaudible. What rubbish and yet how many column inches and TV hours were devoted to this dystopian, freak-show spectacle!

The second-rate-farce theatre of Westminster politics is in equal turmoil. I am a Brexit-supporting Conservative, much influenced by the transformational Margaret Thatcher governments of the 1980s. We are supposedly enjoying a Tory regime, but where are the Tories? Our Prime Minister, Rishi Sunak, has piled tax upon tax, regulation upon regulation as if he wanted to outdo unlamented Brussels. The economy creaks forward by a tiny fraction a month, robotically controlled by Jeremy Hunt and less internationally competitive by the day. There are occasional flashes of common sense from Michael Gove, Suella Braverman and Jacob Rees-Mogg but we see no consistent vision for the future and nothing remotely inspirational. Some blame inflation, the Ukraine war and Covid for the malaise, but actually the basic problem is a Tory lack of grip and political cunning – a government needs to be 5 steps ahead of its political adversaries, not 3 steps behind. But who on earth will follow these inept, burnt-out has-beens?

 

Most people believe Sir Keir Starmer and Labour are in pole position to sweep into power at the next election. That is not a mouth-watering prospect, to say the least. Starmer is an unreconstructed Woke Leftie, who swallowed every idiocy pronounced by the appalling erstwhile Labour leader Jeremy Corbyn, without demur. The image most associated with Starmer is he (accompanied by his crass deputy Angela Rayner) piously “taking the knee” in respect towards the dubious and violent Black Lives Matter cause. His principles blow with the wind – Brexiteer one day, Remainer the next – today he promises to ‘renegotiate” Brexit. He denounces crime, while failing to mention he was Director of Public Prosecutions 2008-13, and took no relevant initiatives. He says he would give the vote to working- resident EU citizens, but flip-flops today when the obviousness of this gerrymandering became plain. He is a man of straw. There are no principles he would not bend in the search for power and none he would defend if seriously challenged. He has no spine and Churchill’s 1931 description of Ramsay Macdonald would resonate, –“The boneless wonder sitting on the Treasury bench”


             Keir Starmer and friends

Starmer’s party, his members and activists, are a talentless rabble, mad, bad and dangerous to know. They are bad because they have turned their backs on key principles of liberal democracy, like free speech (supporting the cancellation of dissenting voices in universities). Their attitude towards Russia and China is at best ambivalent, so we certainly cannot sleep easily in our beds, as the Left has no respect for our hard-won freedoms or the principle of national defence. Their traditional pay-masters, the trades unions, are re-asserting themselves and openly preach communist claptrap, such as the imminent destruction of capitalism. They may well fool many in the moronic reaches of the electorate, but we can only pray that enough sensible voters have survived to stem their toxic flow.

Currently, there is not much to encourage us. The Civil Service is infiltrated by the Woke, doctors and nurses strike for absurd pay rises, the NHS is near collapse, school staff strike at the drop of a hat. It is not just the public sector either. Bank workers “work from home”, businesses suffer huge absenteeism, the entire work-force is often idle and work-shy. Can it ever be turned round?

My generation needs some good news. In the existing atmosphere, we are returning to our shell and not surrendering anything. We are not sending the Elgin Marbles back to Greece, we are not apologising for the sins of the past like Slavery (Arabs and black African rulers were much worse than we were) or Colonialism (that impertinent US Declaration in 1776 was a robbery for which we should be richly compensated! Maybe that is a long shot!?). Just say No! to adversaries and not be an easy touch for anyone.

SMD

17.5.23

Wednesday, May 10, 2023

LIFE'S MYSTERY

 

Nobody has ever accused me of profundity but now and then I am bemused by the inane superficiality of our modern lives and inevitably this train of thought raises difficult questions, viz:

-          How did humanity evolve, and what sort of creatures are we?

-          Can we improve on the current model?

-          What is the purpose of our existence anyway?

Let us shakily and inexpertly address these unanswerable riddles.

Our cousin the Chimpanzee


    

                                                                 Our Neanderthal brother

Darwin tells us that our ancestor was: A hairy quadruped, furnished with a tail and pointed ears, probably arboreal in its habits. Our affinity to the chimpanzee is close as our DNA is a 98.4% match to that of the chimp. Over the aeons of archaeological time our species of homo sapiens evolved, with many diversions, from the great ape hominids to the anatomically modern hominims, eliminating the Neanderthals some 100,000 years ago after some intermingling. The human brain was now 3 times the size of a chimp’s. Originally in Africa, our human ancestors spread themselves widely to Asia, Europe and Australia. Sociably, they lived in settlements with their extended family (tribe), hunting and gathering together over many centuries. Eventually something akin to a civilisation developed in Mesopotamia, the Indus Valley and later in Egypt. Homo Sapiens had at last arrived - though he could easily disappoint!   

                                          


                                                Modern Man, with all his failings

Yes, I chose a picture of a scruffy booze-befuddled American, when I could have selected an image of Goethe, Leonardo, Newton, Balzac or some other worthy. But ask yourself who is more typical? The great majority of Earth’s population live very limited lives, exploited peasants in Asia, helpless cannon-fodder in Russia, toiling wage-slaves in Europe, compulsive consumers in America, prey to all the temptations and abuses of a money-obsessed society. Only a minority on any continent receive the benefits of a decent education, adequate income, a healthy environment and a satisfying lifestyle. Women and children globally still fare much worse than men, to our shame.

Of course, there has been huge progress since our Troglodyte phase. Progress in terms of infrastructure, city life, technology, control of disease, respect for community, self-awareness has been immense, but inequalities are stubbornly persistent and the “toiling masses” live poorly. Man has many animalistic traits – the search for dominance, ruthlessness in many situations, hatred of rivals, all of which create conflict. There are gentler animalistic instincts we retain – like the Atlantic salmon, we are drawn to our birth-place in our later years, or like that dog in Ulster who trekked home, after escaping from a kind rescuer, we have a longing for adventurous travel but often end up not far from home.

Can science and technology improve our lot? No doubt we could live a little longer, but to what purpose? Our youth and maturity are already too short and creating more twilight years is self-defeating (not to say bankrupting!). I imagine we have the technology politely to make sterile large sections of the population, which would quickly give us more room and less mouths to feed, but raises a multitude of ethical and economic dilemmas. Applying straight-forward logic to these loaded questions is perilous. Already the co-founder of Apple, Steve Wozniak, has advocated a pause in the development of high-capability Artificial Intelligence (AI).



                        AI guru Steve Wozniak

There is a dystopian fear that sophisticated AI robots could outwit their human creators and execute their own programmes of action. Science fiction drama could become alarming fact. These fears may be exaggerated, but humanity needs carefully to control any huge leap in technological capabilities.

More fundamentally, what’s the name of the game anyway? Stripped of illusion, Western man is born of his mother, grows up in a family of varying closeness, often starts earning his living in his teens, gets married, procreates, reaches maturity at 50, ages quite quickly and dies of various ailments when he is about 80. He decays and turns into dust, the plaything of the winds. Only a few live a remarkable life, and even fewer a heroic one. In my undergraduate days in the early 1960s, I embraced Humanism, morality without religion, influenced by Margaret Knight, Bertrand Russell, Jacob Bronowski and other savants. It seemed sensible but was admittedly a trifle bleak, as our existence seemed to serve no obvious purpose nor solve any mystery.

I deplored “revealed religion” as its pretensions and claims were contradicted by historical method, comparative religion, psychology and even by archaeology and it had produced some very rum characters like Torquemada, St Thomas More, Bloody Mary, John Knox, Ignatius Loyola and Pius IX. And yet…

A few days ago, we British witnessed the Coronation of King Charles III. Carrying his sceptres and wearing his crown, richly cloaked, his image is medieval, wholly at odds with the modern world. There was much hocus-pocus with anointing oils, ancient regalia and pledging homage. But most would agree that the ceremony, with its music, was something beautiful, uplifting and comforting, speaking to some primeval instincts within us.


   King Charles III                      

When I turn up my toes (or, more euphemistically, am “gathered in”) and if I hear a celestial choir of angels; I will be well pleased, and not totally surprised!

 

SMD

9.5.23

Text copyright © Sidney Donald 2023